I peepd ya matches - Ionno wtf you thought, cuz'..
But if ya shit 'sfeared - then my shit's baseball bats and golf clubs..
^Pretty good opener. Fresh wordplay.

When I pull out - I'mma bust until this fag screams out he'on want nomore..
I ain't perverted - we all just hope I creep ya verses out, and evasively shut the door..
^Didn't like this one as much. But alright.

Forfeit or feel four fists til' ya eye gleams..
I'll make it Sting til it rocks facepaint, does the Scorpion Death Lock, and skydives in the rinnng..
^Thought this was shit.

Ngga - my fuckin' fist is just viscous and raw..
I'll beat you to within the inch of your life..
...........THEN feed that baby dick to my dog..
^Yeah, this was pretty shitty too.

Those played concepts can't save you now..
You're old shit is a hoax..
..Infact, I swore they were drowned at a Salem Trial..
^This was pretty dumb too.

I hate you clown - and the set-up of ya rhymes, should be burned alive..
My winning votes here - 'slike heads usin' ya style - it'll stop around '05..
^I agree with with Solo. Wording was fucked.

so pleeeaaase - I'll be moving on to the next round to make heads fly..
While this ngga here's tryin his hardest find a dope way to word "Ed Die".
^Haha. Simple, but still funny.





ya chicks packin baggage, dont' brag bitch I'd rather jus fued
shit faggot..even ya girls Figure of speech is fucking fatter than you
^I thought it was kinda dumb, but still kinda funny.

noone even noticed your whore, shes ugly an I'll be boastin some more
ya know its reached its Boiling point..when ya girl's STILL coated wit Sores
^Didn't like this much.

faggot thinks he's a movie star, Samuel Jackson?..you ain't real so move
butt Eddie's in Shaft?..but backwards that statement simply reveals the truth
^Lmao. That was fuckin' disgusting but funny.

while your compared bitch..'Eddie' we know your gay cuz ya files coherent
take ya outa special Ed,..leave ya wit Die like queers usually style their hair wit
^Didn't like this one.

all that streched shit, lines stickin out.. that'll just cause you to lose son
I know ma fists Structure verse pretty hard..but didn't realize youd fail to use one
^Played to fuck, but still alright.

its new homo..you want in vtl? you want out?..so choose a week to quit
an I wish you'd Make up your mind..but then it'd be familiar with ya cheeks an lips
^Nah, shit is weak.

your weak admit, styles legit? I'll pummel you til ya head rings like this
try to copyright..but to mimic me ya gotta learn how to NOT swing like a bitch
^Ehhhh, kinda alright.




Honestly, I thought Lay took this pretty easy. I thought Eddie's verse had an alright line here or there, his opener was pretty good. But overall, Lay had a few more decent punches than he did. I thought Eddie's verse was pretty boring to read. Lay's wasn't much better, but his punches were better even though it wasn't fun reading either verses.

V/Lay

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