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Old 08-23-08, 06:13 AM   #13
LPMNDCTE
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Champ you are indeed but let me plant the first seed,
So what am i?? if your jus one of many bitches hanging off me like a necklace beed.
descent

Kirk by name captain lonely by nature,
it's not your fault that peps dont rate ya,if you wonna be in with ya mates get a new

avatar.
barely rhymes man

You let me drop first so again you choose to follow rather then lead like a king,
i feel sorrow for you wanting to be part of me so i'l guide you under my wing.
barely descent


I'l flip your lame ass ryhme scemes all over the shop your style is loaned,
but i like you so after this demolishion i'l pick u up just after i hold high the cup

you once owned.
barely descent

So as it stands your favourite so im the challenger,
but i occupy the greatness tag and your jus along for the ride as passenger.
played concept, not a creative flip


Im solid in this game and i'l show ya prevoking this joke,
you mimic washed up folk and now your just stuck in the middle like egg yolk.
Nothing here

So these be lines 13/14 from where your hanging i cant be seen,
u roll with has beens now washed up better known as crack fiend's.
played concept and weak hit

Your not needed in this life you couldnt get a clip on jeremy beadle,
So i give you this advice give up the crack and pick up the needle.
I see the wordplay, but its weak


verses


Think you runnin' this but I'll Sonya. Actin' like a tyrant when the gay battles me,
But in this M-K match up. I'll fuckin' MASH this controller till it ends in a fatality,
good opener

Am I prepared? Well, I've repped Maryland since birth and my fires crushin' mic.'s,
So who needs practice, bitch? I've been walkin' all over MD my entire fuckin' life,
nice setup into a hard hit

Can't rap for shit, you pedo faggot. Talkin' bout how your verses makin' girls wet,
What do you know about sweet 16s? Your bitch hasn't even celebrated hers yet,
barely descent

You got crowds of 10 to 12 years olds yellin. All I can say is fuck, that's sad,
With them preteens yellin' "OH M...... GEE! How does he fuckin' suck that bad?!"
barely descent

Talkin' about avys and shit, bro. LAWL. I'd claim that you had that 05 style son,
But seriously, kid.... YOUR avatar is clearly where your style derived from,
both line played

And everybodies reppin' DBZ. Well, I'd hop on the bandwagon but it's a waste,
Who needs to rep it? When I've been dragon balls... all over your bitches face,
pretty creative, good wordplay

And lmao at your sig..Bro, that easily tells me that you're a pure chump,
But guess what else means nothing without U? ......The word suck.
chump and suck do not rhyme

You tiny little bitch. Its a waste of time even thinkin' this twig has got fans,
I'ma bail though. Cause I could smash a fuckin' stick playin' Rockband.
descent closer


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Vote - Kirk, he had a more entertaining verse and harder hits because of the creativity that he combined with his wordplay. Nice effective verse. This was an okay battle.
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