I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas
that really didnt hit to me man sorry..

Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet
I feel sorry for you cuz-
RV's his only home... on and off the internet
kinda seen this comin, it was still nice though
[B]wording was a little off, but not bad

And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice
For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid
think i seen the concept before, so not really feelin
this one either...and he did not force the rhyme here
[B]the rhyme was perfect to me


I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady
Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy
wasnt feelin this one either

Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace
Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face
weak closer, gotta do better next verse

Next up.. another nobody

Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear
When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears!
got a chuckle... but nothing special

Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick
Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks
nice, someone didnt get this, i dont see how they didnt get it
this was cool..

Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong
Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on
too basic to me, seemed kinda frontlinish

Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it
Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did
i get it, but didnt really like..

Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you?
U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do
another weak closer...

most of your verse was blah, nothing stood out
but we'll see what Flow drops and go from there


You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet
no punch here, saying he hasnt won a battle is not a diss,
your just simply sayin he hasnt won a battle, ok ...and..

Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck
Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck
too simple, nothing special here


Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars
In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars
nope, thats played has hell, sorry

Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak
My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak
nope, first off, never bold words, we can see them,
second.. you forgot to throw a punch...u are saying u will win
even though your opener was weak..thats not dissin him
if anything its filler, and glorifying yourself, feel me

This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds
Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested
that played too homie, i seen a line like that at least a year ago and it was
played then, sorry dude

Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock
Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock
nope, matter of fact i hated it...wording was horrible
seem to me you couldnt think of anything else to rhyme
so u wrote the first thing that came to mind..didnt like

Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched
Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek
wtf, what are u talking about, what does osama bin laden
have to do with him, i get the punch, but it was a stretch
it didnt connect, and you are slowly digging a deeper hole
for yourself..your setup should have helped your punch more
in this case..i know that osama being in star trek is a slim chance
and u are saying him winning is a slim chance too, right..
well that was a terrible way to throw that punch man

With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae
Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play
played..sorry thats played too...your multis were on pointe
dont get me wrong, but that means nothing if your just going to throw
a played ass punch

Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping
It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping
i actually chuckled...if you would have worded it better...
it would have had more of an impact...other than that
it was the best punch you've thrown

Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard
Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts
once again i liked the multis, but the closer really didnt
do it for me, sorry man
just being honest



ok, its safe to say the Willy gets this with a mediocre verse
at best..
Flow really didnt show me much...he came played for the most
part...i think he need to continue reading other battles
to find out what is played and whats not
please dont argue with me about my comments. i was just being honest
people critique my shit all the time and i use their criticism to get better
and i hope you do the same

V/Willy Dexter

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