In this verse over played vocab is this!
shit im a hustla by injection,not rejection,lyricist at da same perception,
i bring da pain and deception,wit any weapon,im cletchin
BTW Fams that don't rhyme

But I personal don't class people using long rhyming words as vocab,
my definition of vocab is the use of unsual words.

I dream of tranquillity to save my mentality
But in reality I can see no form of solidarity

Is that overplaying vocab ? I don't think so.

We need to work on your structure, you stretch your bars u need to write
them,. then get rid of the deadwood refine the bar.

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