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Old 01-21-05, 03:15 AM   #8
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Breaking this down bar by bar will take a while but oh well its the finals

Socrates:

Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
^^lmao pretty funny solid punch good set up 9/10
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
^^good meta liked the maine/NJ thing pretty good 7/10
Ya records whack, plus ya garbage, listen dog ya hated
Pop couldnt create a buzz...unless the drink is carbonated
^^decent good meta 6/10
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
^^lmao maybe your dopest bar so far good personal and punch 9/10
Son is fat as fuck, excersizing is what he needs to learn
I dont care...but hes too fat to get as far as hes concerned
^^wack 4/10
Look son, I dont even need techs, my rhymes flaming
i’ll hand you an L and I dont even KNOW sign language
^^good bar 6/10
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
^^decent 5/10
Let me get out slow and have you get it...U-R-WHACK!
Nigga i’ll hit you wit enough Clipse to be sued by Startrack
^^dope meta wack punch 6/10
You wanna hang son? Well lemme give you the noose
Plus I got niggas that’ll Hop On Pop faster than Dr. Suess
^^lol good shit 7/10
Plus ya girls a ho, son I aint fuckin her regardless
Cuz shes had more tricks b/w her legs than slam dunk contests
^^dope bar good meta 8/10
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size
^^another good punch good closer coulda been better 7/10

overall : 74/110 (67%)

Pop Lotty:

...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
^^lmao dope opener good personal 9/10
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
^^ another good personal 8/10
Broke nigga, need the money, you fresh? That’s a fable
This battle could down to the wire…not, Soc can’t afford cable
^^decent 5/10
On my dick for the longest, already aware that he cant contest
Just Sunday he was making threads about how him and I are the best
^^ehh decent 5/10
Mad on AIM when Dimez was givin me attention, biggest clown in here
Soc, theres more fish in the sea…I hope you go drown in there
^^good punch 6/10
You have no life, don’t want me to put you on blast dude
Exposin ya aliases will be more of a embarrassment than losin the battle
^^decent personal ok bar 7/10
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
^^decent personal decent meta 6/10
You better be on ya A game, and bring your best at me
Cuz we even in notes and letters….that S always comes after P
^^concept is played 4/10
I’m already well prepared for Soc, ready to leave em roasted
Cuz he’ll prolly want me to review his verse on AIM before he posts it
^^good bar 8/10
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
^^good bar 7/10
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture
^^ehh decent closer could have been better also 6/10

overall : 71/110 (65%)

dope battle.. but soc edged this one out with better concepts... just my opinion though, let the best man win.... my money
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