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Old 11-15-06, 10:53 PM   #35
Triple_N
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OK..now that intro was jus hilarious yall took that chipmunk shit to the next level LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!....ok first verse flow comes in strong u use alot of callbacks in ya flow...u used too many its great for battle cuz u can throw alot of words in btw the rhymes but gets repetitive..delivery had nice energy...liked addlibs....second verse same as first flow wise jus lyrically WAYYY harder....u had sum ouch lines...but also had sum played shit throughout this battle...lyrically inconsistent but the lines that hit..HIT HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!like DAYUM!!!!!

Ouch lines:

Dude, wait... King of the North?
Fuck a coast, kid, you ain't even King of your State

Your weak, I tell your, girl "yo honey, you nude yet?"
Cuz losing's a bitch, and the only one you'll get

You reppin' Alanson, kid. That just shows that you wack
But congrats, on being King, where nobody raps!<-----BIGT OUCH!!!!!that stung

I'll leave your group with a knife to their neck right
Cuz it's a Breeze beating Summers, like your sex life<----OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers
Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall<-----GOD DAYUM!!!!!!


Those lines right there overhand rights to the jaw fo real....good shit....1
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