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Old 06-19-08, 11:47 AM   #10
Kirk
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Sv gets my vote because his verse was better put together, good vocab., good multis, generic take on the topic but that's not really where you needed to shine. Actually was able to read SV's without feeling like I was wasting my life.

DeadlyV, noone of this is hate but I could barely get through your verse. Nothing you said really made me want to keep readin'. Also, your take on the topic was pretty generic. It was just poorly written. Half way through it was like you were tryna battle him. I just didn't see where you were comin' from, man. No hate, you just need to work on some things.

Vote - SV

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