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IP:
v/Brandon
Felt his concept alot more then exact's.... the storyline was better i liked the way his flowed compared to exact's... the imagery was about the same in both pieces but what stood out was brandon's emotion to me in this piece.
exact you still got some work to do but you almost there
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