very touching piece, well thoughtout, and very well described.

very unique idea, and you executed it masterfully. i actually loved the storyline, and how it unfurled; you have a way with words, and you play everything out very nice.

you can really be captured by this, compelling and intuitive......props all the way around, for writing a fuckin' sound piece, keep up.

rtf on my OM which i am posting in a few minutes.

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