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Old 07-12-04, 10:05 AM   #14
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Yo i thought this was a nice topical battle both did hot verses but i think Re$ got this. He had a better layout and the structure was better than L.O.T also his flowed just better and seemed more realistic. Both had decent imagery and nice wordplay but Re$ rhyme scheme was better and i was liking it more to be honest but 1 thing i would suggest is, is to lose the blue and for L.O.T to not multi colour coz it can be a bit hard to read at times but overall good spit peeps.

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