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Old 11-21-04, 09:43 AM   #6
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DAAAAAAAAAMN!!!!!!!

First I'd like to say props to both cuz y'all definitely the two hottest femcees on this site, hands down! There were flames sparking from both sides this time around... one of the fiercest battles I've seen since i been here... now for the breakdown:


I’ll shit on this dame….. willappear thinks u will win? -That bitch is insane.
I stamp out little camp FIYAS, ……then squat down and piss on the flame

killer opener.. nice... startin off with heat...

Your name is defamed! ….Life repeats itself like a standing rerun
Cuz I’ve sunned this bitch before- & she’s back for more like a tanning salon.

nice personal....but... i thought the rhyme (couplet) was a little forced here... still an effective punch/personal other than that

I’m demanding refunds Cuz your audio was wack - ……Don’t try-tah debate.
Can’t get away with thinking its dope! ….cuz I boarded all Fiya-escapes

the set-up was cool and i liked where the personal was going... but the line that finished it off lost steam... i think it coulda hit harder if it were reworded

Justice is never yours, ……….as long as there’s someone to get it
You, the Duchess-of-METAPHORS?? Be nice to see AT LEAST ‘one’ in your lyrics.

this line was aiight... i've seen ya hit a lot harder shi

These kids are hysterics- got clowning material for days on these dumb bitches
Ur audios, and no shows.…. Plus still got links to your shitty prom pictures!

damn...lol... the prom pics again... i'm kinda used to seeing these but with the other stuff added it was a pretty good personal and punch combo here

Last time u ditched my battle….tho it's well known I instill the fear.
If u take hints from your clit riders. Maybe this time u Will Appear.

lmao... definitely the best line in this verse... shyt's funny as hell... sorry fiya but that shyt was dope!

I’m still sincere, when I say my verse makes predictions bleeker
I'm like Ron Artest throwin PUNCHES….. and you're the fat ass attention seeker

haha... like the use of current events in this line but the set-up coulda been a tad better

I would battle to get u banned……. But with no-shows you’d try-tah stall
So now I’m like, Fuck a pink slip!...… I’ll just enable my Fiya wall.

original closer... nice... omma give this verse a 8.5/10




I throw chains- linkin’ your 4 O’s like symbols for Audis [text n audio record]
I Torah most likely, as top 5 bitch your only Deuteronomy

sick!... that's all i got to say about that!

Name's got irony, cuz your spelling’s hid in abridged books
Shoulda took ya verse 2 RapWorlds but Meziaa got u shook! (lo-fi)

lol... nice personal... i don't think everyone know the story behind that but it's a decent personal

Bulimia got looks, ya pic heard “threw up”, and left the forum!
Stompin' her throat, I stole ribs of Adam’s, his apple’s ya orange (her adam’s apple)

ehhhh... not really feeling this line too much

SINGLEd vocab worn, some doubt’s form as ur EXaggeratin text!
Get pumped in rigged tourneys, now you whip-lashing headrest (ego)

first part was crazy but i wasn't feeling the headrest part.. i think you coulda came up with sumn else for that

Soak ya ego in warm H2O, palm ya own skull, til u dead AND broke!(Skull in hand-sig)*
now I kaleidoscopes, to see this loss I’ll give back your first Quote!

hot line here... lol...liked the word play

Ya votes a lifted miracle, ur Kerry in levels, while I’m Burning Bush!**
Teleprompter cooked like roasted engines, ya need an extra push?!

... no personal found here... no real punch either...filler

Ya crew’s overlooked, but the last battle u put famine personals..
ya truly A. P.ussy,don’t hit Front Lines, make ya accept this arsenal.!***

nice wordplay in the set up but the punch coulda been done more effectively

F^3 agencies, ya hertz cycled this second round until ya anorexic!
I blew out the candles right with ya lyrics--left this loss invested..!****

nice closer!... omma have to give this one a 9.0...

damn this shyt was close and almost too hard to judge... i like both femcees but sum1's gotta win... my vote goes to fiya this time
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