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Old 08-18-04, 11:49 PM   #32
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: goats

pretty one-sided battle but both was pretty good

RobKilla: opener: basically a threat and not a punch
and was moe of a jackson diss
flow:it was ok
punches: not very good
strucutre: terrible had these~~>///
closer: not good at all

Goats: opener: pretty good
flow: good but a little streched
punches: nice
structure: good
closer: basic rhyme but still good

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