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Old 01-28-04, 05:25 PM   #4
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im going out on a limb here, n' gon get into this one
so if you get confused or dont understand, just ask.
the light blue is hard to see. just put the curser over
it like you were going to copy it.. you'll be able to see it

I Shoulda Been...

Roland - main character
Miguel - rolands brother
SeaWeed - close friend(goofier of them)
Tiny - close friend(weight-trainer)
Cloud - close friend(most reliable)

-IntroDuction-
Kids When They'd Meet, n' Curvin Comitees
They'd Run The Streets, Of Urban Cities..
5 Males, re-Track The Past, What They've Been Apart Of
Crack Sale, Cops, Guns' Blast.. And Thats Where It Started..

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-Chapter One-
Introducing
RUN! Over That Fence, Round To 44th And Main
Gotta Love The Suspence, Whats Your Name?

Running, I Told Him, Drained Out From The Sound
What Up Roland.. Kids Round Here Call Me Cloud
Whos The One Who Fell? Suttin I Wondered
Thats Miguel.. Hes My Kid Brother

Cloud Didn't Just Use Me, n' Was A Step Behind Me
Then he Introduced Me, To A Built Dude Named Tiny
yet, My Body Bleedin.. My Eyes Backed Into A Haze
So They Treated, The Bullet Wound In My Leg
Did Just To Try, Told Me To Please Breath
An Abnormal Looking Guy, Who Went By SeaWeed
It Was Early Summer, Moved When We Could
They Looked To Eachother, Welcome To The Neighborhood...

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-Yonder Chapter-
The Planning
We Grew, Side By Side.. As It Came To Be
An Inserperable Five.. We Ran The Streets
Smoked Pot.. Which Basically Meant Nothing
Ran From Cops.. n' Sold Crack For Rent Money


We Got A Job, They Knew What He Meant
If He Asked, I'd Nod.. n' Listened w/ More Intent

Theres A Truck w. Product.. 18 Wheeled Mack
We're going To Rob It, N' Heres Where We Meet Back
We're The Best Of The Best.. N' I've Saw Worse
so He Haded Us BulletProof Vests.. n' Revolvers
You Wanna Live Right?.. Then Dont Be Shook Kids
Meet Me At Midnight.. Under The Bridge, south End Of Brooklyn..



I Dont Know About This.. It Aint Gon' Be A Breeze
I Doubt It.. Even Death Could Bring Big Men To Their Knees
Its Just One Night.. Or Thats What I Told Him

Your Probably Right.. Thanks For That Roland

Miguel, Your Not Gun' Go.. I Dont Want You At Risk
I'm 22 Years Old.. I Dont Need to Take This Shit
I'll Go If I Want.. My Life, My Shit!
Thats What I Thought..
Roland Felt Silent..

He'd Need Me.. And Ten Minutes Later
I Seen SeaWeed.. Puttin Bullets In The Guns Chamber


I'll Shoot When i Gotta Shoot, Be Out When I Gotta Run
Do What I Gotta Do, To Get this Job Done

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-Anticipated Chapter-
The Climax

We Met For Our Seconds.. Everyone Showed
We Gathered Our Weapons.. Together, Close
Discussions We Wont Forget.. It Was The End Of Summer
So We Said Our Good Lucks.. And Wished Well For Eachother


Two Of You With Me.. Other Two w. Roland
You Know Where To Meet.. n' How To Hold Em'
If You Get In Trouble.. Or Filled With Doubt
Dont Be Puzzled.. Get Back To The House
This Shouldn't Be Difficult.. I'd Be Damned B
If It Gets Physical.. Know Ya'll My Family


SeaWeed, Tiny.. Ya'll Ready?.. We Got Them..
Hold Steady..
I Call Shotgun!
We Laughed At His Humor.. Figured We'd Care Now
Reminised Later Than Sooner.. Until We Pulled To The Warehouse

Tiny Pulled The Door Hatch.. Inside The Buildin
It Would Be A War Path.. n' I'd Kill Them
But Silent We Tried.. Slower To Wait
We Attepted To Hide, 2Late,SeaWeed Fell Over A Crate
Men Rushed In.. We Ran For Cover
They Jumped Shit, We Shot for Another
They Were Getting Closer, We Retracted
SeaWeed Jumped Over, n' Ran As A Distraction
I Tried To Stop Them.. n' I Wouldn't Normally
But Not This.. As He Got Shot Right Before Me
Tiny Tear'd.. I Heard Shots On The Other Wall
Filled w. Fear.. I Told Him To Run Or We'd Fall
Everything Mixed Up.. Clips out, Defenseless
I Told Him To Split Up.. But He Was Hit Before-
I Could Finish My Sentence....
Miguel Caught Alarm.. Sending Them Near
I Held The Big Man In My Arms, I didn't Wann be Here..
Your Always With Me.. n' Dodged For Cover
Ran Swiftly.. To Secure The Safeness Of My Brother
My Lungs Moist.. For The Kid I Loved
Miguel At Gun Point, Wouldn't Tell Where I Was
I Paused.. At The Situation Was Called For
In Aww.. Miguel Was At Cloud's Revolver

Last Time.. Where Is He now!?!
You'll Never Find-- He Fell To The Ground
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-Ending Sequence-
The Funeral

I Shoulda Been Aware
I Shoulda Been Cautious
I Shoulda Cared
Now I'll Remain Haunted
I Shoulda Never Agreed
I Shoulda Never Popped Shit
I Shoulda Been Free
I Could Have Stopped It
I Shoulda Been un-Persuasive
I Shoulda Been Shot
I Shoulda Been Hated
But What I Shoulda Been Is What Im Not