man OSB, here's what i liked the most about your piece, the lines

Proving I'm right, obscure brightness isn't a viewable light,
Like sun off a glacier, moving sluggishly but a beautiful site,
Poetic genius writing sentences as well as leading the movement,
I'm not concieted... Every single line I'm seeing improvement,
Needing to prove it? Our creation is causing the ground shaking,
Tectonic plates cracking, snapping, collapsing the foundation,
Ground breaking lyrical wizardry, rain has fell from skies,
Literally... The storm is approaching..... Drakel and I...

^ flowed so good, and awesome image, shit this was awesome, crazy piece man.

well done.

bolded one was the best, just so good

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