This was a very good piece by both of my OG brethren i think yall came with good emotion... and your verses actually made the whole piece come together into one whole om rather thn two random verses put together...
OSB:
Poetic genius writing sentences as well as leading the movement,
I'm not concieted... Every single line I'm seeing improvement,
^These two lines stood out for me very well put and also very true your improvement is obviously seen throughout your om's..
Drakel:
it wont expire, sending satisfaction even to those who dont admire
your reaction will grow with my flow cause the winds here only blow higher
^Imagery ...very nice i felt this verse the most it shows your very decriptive imagery in your piece..
Overall 9.1/10
, Good Job Guys