DOPE concept guys, i really liked this as a topic and you both laced with imagery and great storytelling about the amulet and your collective quest to get it. The twist at the end was a great finisher, the rhyme scheme was strong in bob's verse, functional in choronos'. I think you both went off a tangent's once or twice when you should've been cracking on with the story but it held by attention despite the length of the piece. A topical gem gentlemen. Good work.

Keep posting, cheers for the rep bob.