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Old 12-21-04, 06:15 PM   #6
JPoll
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the breakdown

first g killaz


All I gotta do is pull up to this battle and watch his Van Go...
You cant handle this weight like your name was Anna Nicole...
8 haha good punch, bad set line though
Battling you is like flow givin me an advance to next round card...
Poppin lyrical steroids couldnt even make your text sound hard...
7.5 decent, heard an offshoot of it though
You fear me cuz ya cant hear me clearly bitch only has one ear...
Im havin' fun here just gotta appear and this pussy will run clear...
6.5 bad, that's it not even really a punch...played and youre better then this
I aint lyin' to you, your whack - what are you tryin to do...
Every click is denyin' you thats why your buying a crew...*
10 haha, that was good...so funny...
Fuck battling this pussy anyways I want this to be a boxing match...
Then we will see how much this pussy ass bitch be talkin back...
7 blah at best
Walkin' Whack, Whats With Wannabe Wigger Writers...
Those are the only W you goin to see, unless you be a biter...
7.5 set line was good but, and the idea was nice, but the punch could have been worded and alot stronger, this coulda been a big line

Vango
Twelve lines to destroy this faggot, no need I can end this battle in eight
Your making all of RV bulimic, we read your text and then we regurgitate
7.5 blah, not very strong, not witty, vocab ain't all that
I see by your avy you like weed, consider my punches chronic to the chest
Gkillaz I knew that you was slow, but really studying 5 days for a urine test?
9.5 oh snap,,,bam good shit
I peeped your verses kid, there extra light on the punches heavy on the fillers
I figured if I tied Wheaties to your waist, at least then you'd be a Cereal Killer
8 hmm,,,a bit blah, kinda stretching out for a nice concept
You remind me of candy kid, cuz I could really take you out "Now or Later"
Man you couldn't get a party pumped with cocaine and a pocket defibrillator
8 well thats decent not really very hard hitting though
It's like the twelve days of xmas and on the 10th day RV gave to me
A kid whose got no chance of winning, just a fake eminem wannabe
8.5 bam thats well worded and pretty hitting
So like Em said "There's no denying my weenie is much bigger than yours
Mine is like sticking a banana between your mamas tits, killa keep the oranges
8.5 haha, that was a good punch, although the wording was pretty terrible...

Vote Vango, just a tad better
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