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Old 09-07-08, 03:05 PM   #6
Lay.
don't try.
 
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From: Above you.
IP:

you've had your run. 10 WEEKS. but i'm tellin you that shit is dead
now you WANT to hang up the mic, so you can stand up to give'em head
lol..
i'm clearly the truth, thinkin you'll win? you must be dumb clown
cuz i'll either make you or break you, but i'm surely eaten ya somehow
na.
got a trademark line style? i feel like the props ya takin are worthless
but dudes see it's HYPED UP...... pause lines that's makin ya verses
ok personal.
i'm breakin this Kirk-bitch. keep talkin, n forreal ya core is torn
cuz my knife'll slit you long enough for dudes to think that your a whore
aight.
man i'm agile as shit. athletic, strong, shiiiit, fucka prime, i'm past mine
i should be a trackstar, since that body shotput you right into flatlines
nice.
i be runnin at amazin speeds, scorin touchdowns, that shits hot
i'ma real athlete, so watch this jockstrap ya girl down to his crotch
haha
forreal she tight dude. really thinkin bout takin her to the basement
n givin her sucha crazy teabag, she'll brew thoughts of ma children's faces
mm okay wordplay. but played concept.
i'm like dead serious yo. ya chick is most definitely a fit for all kings
we met eyes, then everything going downhill from there was a literal thing
lmao.
n i'm sure you love your parents. cuz they don't care if ya suck
but when your father put his sundown, that moon got one hell of a fuck
moon being his son's ass?..na, reaching.
i can break you easily man. so wen ya bones break dnt pout dude
cuz the strongarm i strike you with'll break your bank account too
mm..na
ma verses come across as sort of an art. it's crazy how i abuse shit
but your preferred craft smells like you cut it instead of used it
nope.
a lot of people are related here. shiiit, you might be ma kin dude
you'll think we're a happy family, right after this barney combo i give you
bar-knee?.. ok, kinda forced.
n your hideous already. i feel sorry for the people that's seen ya pout
cuz your face sets off an alarm ADT's been havin wet dreams about
hahaha.
your dirty too dude. i'ma tell you one time to fuckin clean your ass
i mean, the smell from that graduate out could kill off an entire senior class
lmao again.
but some think your cool, got some chicks jiratin on ya top
so we can go clubbin' together, but your still takin all the shots
coo.
this league loves Kirk tho man. gettin more fans as his stats grow
you've got a huge following, but being that fat HAS to make a massive shadow
lol.
you besta believe dude. i have severe power that'll make ya bleed b
but i'd needa army to take you down...
..shit it takes an entire hospital to roll you over to watch tv
mmm miss.
n your broke as shit dude. but i feel str8 lost today
cuz how the fuck can you be broke sportin' fortunes on ya face
haha. four chins,
your not ready for me man. you kno it, n i'm sure ya past will tell
i can sense some fear in ya, balls deep, n pumpin fast as hell
lol @ you both havin concepts bout me.. fuck you
you never got no twat with that body. ya face is ugly n the rest is shit
you've had your v-card long enough to start gettin membership benefits
ok kinda played.




vs




Don't lie. Your girl is your life. You don't got time to make cash, geek.
Cause that fat bitch could fill up your fuckin' schedule with half of an ass cheek,
okay, not too creative.
Bet you claim to get bitches to suck it. Well, you're dreaming then Sagat,
Why would you letter? When you're only one of them away from being a fagat,
lol..
You ain't no street fighter, Sag. Though I guess that your styles relate, dude.
But you don't fight. You just wear them short shorts hoping that a Guile date you,
haha coo
Bitching about me needing till Saturday. Hypocrite, don't be fuckin' wack,
Cryin bout extenchins, when every bitch youve dated has had atleast double that,
no, that was forced as fuck. ExTenchins? nooo
I'm as good as I say I am. And you? None will claim you're great as fuck,
But I bet his bitch overate Mar's bars. Thats prolly why she weighs so much,
na didn't like this, did you mean Mar's Bar?
I'm from the land of oppurtunity. And where your from is pretty worse,
Cause all it ever did for you was helped jamaica nother shitty verse,
wordplay's been done..but since he lives there it hits, solid.
You ain't never impressed me. But I bet you think you're pushin' it hard,
Only time i've said "GAT! OH!" I was tellin' everyone how much of a pussy you are,
this is the first time I've seen you miss with one of these.
Out of nowhere this cunts brave? But I punch till this bitch is scarred,
Truth is that Sag's always been Fearfull.... From riding his dick so hard,
haha..fuck you,
Man, your girl is an animal. Dude says I'm lion and I should prove it.
You're just Madagascar carrying her doesn't have enough power to MOVE IT!
haha nice man.
This dude is a fuckin' FRUIT... And when dudes come to the wrong home,
You're quick to in vitamin... cause you're looking for a strong bone,
again very solid.
Theres a fine line between you and I. Our girls and how their words thrown,
Cuz when youre in the doghouse. It just means youre hangin at your girls home,
nope.. miss, not creative.
The undisputed champ. You best believe that these punches will be felt whore,
Want me to lose but I don't wanna, Sag. That's what I got this fuckin' belt for,
lol.
I don't even take this shit seriously. I'm a monster compared to you,
So, forget digging up dirt on you. I'll just use your fuckin' verse to bury you,
na played.
You're used to sexual favors. Constantly gettin recorded givin' hand jobs, faggot,
Funniest video I've ever seens you in a full house, having your head bob, sagat,
na..ok concept, but execcuted weakly.
Such a dirty ass whore. I'm exclaiming your broke so they know its clear.
You were never power ranked, and I still smell your stank ass from over here,
na.. this concept was done not to long ago by flight.
Honestly, I thought you were Lay. Now its clear that you're basically not,
I realized that when you had to take his dick out your mouth to make a response,
no, not witty.
We're both sports players, bro. But you being better than me? That's bold.
Cause hes got athletes foot probs. I'm havin trouble pryin' mine out his asshole,
aight.
You're chick is a whore-ish bag of bones. Forreal yo, that girls fucked,
We've all seen her tits, Sag. Every fuckin' time she lifts her skirt up,
no.. this is like the same as your reach up ya girls skirt n get to second base line.
I don't give a fuck about this battle and it shows. This wank bitch'll bruise,
Bitching about when I drop. I've never seen somebody so anxious to lose.
this was a filler'd closer.




Both had some nice shit here an there..an both had some area's where they went from landing..to completely missing, expected with this many lines.. Kirk started out weak..an had some misses..some forced wordplay.. then from the fearfull line an teh few tha followed were nice punches thrown in.. then kidna went from solid to miss solid to miss.an he dropped off his last few liens..seemedl ike he got lazy.. sagat started out solid.. kinda fell out a bit, picked it back up in the middle an carried a bit of consistency through the rest of his verse. He had some nice shit in there too. I got Sagat with 10 quotables to Kirks 8,.. close. Good battle. I took the time to break down 80 lines..so the rest of you faggots can vote now, vote honestly. No one line bullshit.

v/sagat
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