you sound like your too close to the mic at the beg....to much boom in ya breathy voiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....take a step back when you try n get sexy on the mic!

hook needs more layers you prolly should layer it if its not you singing already on there
in editing....cuz out every deep breath...it will clean up the quick flow....but this was some okay shit, but ive become acoustemed to hearing better shit from you....so step it up

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