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Old 07-19-06, 10:06 PM   #6
Pakaveli
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Posts: 50
From: In Shadows
IP:

Both the drops were very good.
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T- your drop was good but the vocabulary wasn't at your usual standard and the flow got awkard at a point as well.
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M-your verse was good too, the flow was good and the complexity in language was very good. Overall, the imagery got you points.
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\/ Malicious, but both you ma dogs so stay up.