Yea you do need to clarify up that you weren't talking about your uncle because that's what I thought throughout this entire verse. I agree with the last guy that replied on pulling out the fillers but you also need to take out all of those "cause"s, you said "cause" so many times in that that it became annoying. Instead of write "are" as "r" spell it out that will increase the flow too, on this line...

cause its u not me u wrong
u no u r if i had a gun id smoke u like a bong/

I kept wanting to run it all together like this...

You no your if I had...

that threw it off so bad so work on spelling stuff out too... good luck, keep elevatin

pz