Given Light:
This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing
Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing
aight not bad...could have been slightly iller.
Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters
Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder
great analogy...first time ive seen this one.
How can you even think about judging someone else......
When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf
wow, played
Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill
So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill
good, im feeling it
And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips
Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped....
haha, bomb closure.

*decent verse, had most of the qualifying
elements. ya got some good punches off
ya had some lines in there that ive never
heard before and one ive hear a million times.
or seen...word. but um, not bad...well see how
tephlon does...

Tephlon:
kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines
The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes
good opener, good personal.
fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire
thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR
uh huh, had no flow whatsoever.
your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it..
dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it''
aight not bad, try again.
u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On
this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One
again, line was aight...but get more indepth with it.
cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round...
ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds..
i dont think this cut it....

*verse was aight, at first i was really feelin
it, had good punches and flow and all... then
the skill level started to die down, like you
was writing this while you was falling asleep.
not bad, just didnt cut... your verse being a
bit mal toward the middle-end...makes GL's
verse stand out. so im gonng go with GL.

vote: Given Light

good verses yall, and good luck to both.


[B]Diman Can Vote, Alias Is Eph

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