Aight Check..

Poetic Justice: 4/10
You Completly Took The Subject and Ruined The Meaning Of Poetry In Motion. You Had Sum Good Lines That Had Emotion But Your Shit Was Just A Run-On No Real Stick Out Talent Verse. You Need A New Style...Just Elevate.

Apotheosis: 7/10
Nice Structure..The Rhyme Scheme Was Nice How You Ryhmed Every Other Line. Not My Style But I Mos Def Liked It. Your Emotion Was...Well Aight....But Your Point Was Across. Nice Drop Man. Keep It Up and Elevate.

Vote - Apotheosis

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