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Old 09-28-05, 08:39 PM   #2
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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^not bad man...i liked it...i find that the structure was dope...had good flow..but ur hooks were kinda annoying..cuz they were so short lined...no prob though....u had good flow through out ur whole verse vocab was iight...coulda been better..concept was good....multis....meh coulda been better...overall 7.5/10..man im fealin this fo real

rtf on one of my battles please i need votes

oh yea...u need 2 links..............for and o/m now
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