this shit was really hot i was feelin it i thought it was very creative and i cant really see a weakness other than u need to use multies more but that may harm ya flow and make it seem forced!

keep producing hot scripts dunn!

my fav lines were:

Inner hells burn our souls in flames until we forget heavenly placement.
Children die in diamond mines.........
..............until we kill for stones and still end up in braclets

keep this shit up dunn!

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+Stealth+