Metaskripts had nice imagery in his story, but your story kind of finised with no real ending. Or maybe I was just expecting a better ending because the buildup was nice, but you kind of left us hanging. Still a soldi drop on a difficult topic.

CMFS- I like how you layed out the topic into intro, conversation and outro. I like the format, I just think you could have done better with your vocab and imagery. kind of a basic drop, not much too it. Next time just get a little deeper with your storyline and use that format to your advantage.

v-metaskripts

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.