first off the beat is sick I love beats with guitars.. now to the track

Flow is solid.. the back up vocals for the first verse were off a bit at the beginning but you came back. Lyrically good. The hook is dope.. very deep. You have the ability to make people listen cause the content is there. You jus need to develop a style like I told you on AIM. Second verse is dope, but the back up vocals were off a bit at points. You gotta keep the same tempo of the flow in the verse it's hard during dubs because your stopping and going.. but you gotta spit the verse in your head while your recording it and spit it how you feel it nah mean. Other than that the joitn is very solid you're getting better and better fam. Good shit