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ok....u coulda used a differen beat yo fa real...u aint have to use a classic beat...but it was ya choice...
but anyway...the lyrics coulda used some more time...punches didnt really stand out to me...like when u said ya head can fall off faster then cheap action figures...maybe its just me but i wasnt feelin that...it woulda been beta at the end if u woulda turned the echo volume down...flow was ok..in the beginnin u crowded hella shit...usome of ya lines was crowded...it was aight...but it seemed like u tried to hard to use effects to make it supa hot..dubs were kinda off at one point...and it seemed like the emotion u put into this track shoulda put out some betta lyrics...but ok job..
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