The beat is alright, not anything I would fuck with. Your voice sounds like Eminem. I think when you end each line and you do that with the last word you should add a slight echo to it. It would've made it much better.
Im feeling the hook.
The 2nd verse so far is coo. Not really some shit I would listen to, but Im really feelin this damn hook though.
the 3rd verse is alright too. I like the hook more than anything in this song.
Overall the song in alright, its not really some shit I would prefer to listen to, but do what you do, ya dig?

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