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DAMMMIT i just wrote a fuckkin huge fukkin huge break down of both ur verses. FUK FUK FUK and sum dik pm'd me a it made the page expire. FUK
put it short.
FUK that pist me off.....sorry
LE had nice emotion, slightly more than DeLeon.
But i felt imagery, descriptiveness, vocab and rhyme skills is where DeLeon took this. So if its kool to crew vote then DeLeon. I wont poll for now and find out if its kool. Dope work from both.....
DeLeon.
Chapter 1, verse 8, in the book of Revelations..
depicting mother earth being shook to its foundations..
Its such a heartless act but take into consideration...
Everything that he's gave us...and how we've repayed him..
We've lied, cheated and stole....are adulterous & dishonest..
Do you REALLY think thats anywhere near what he'ed of wanted..
Releasing its agressive rhythem, as war-scarred warriors fell
Burnt flesh....heavily decorated by shards of shrapnel...
The wounded left to die, as bystanders stand the sidelines..
Wide eyed....Watching the blood pour, and try to fight cryin..
Bare Flesh..torn from bone...as the innocent fall...
only a select few will be able to claim they witnessed it all..
Limited.....
The determination...is existing in our leader's eyes
We are in desperation...we'll be begging for our lives
We begin to march...my heart's pace is quickening
Sweat drips down my face...the fear is sickening
Snap back to reality...the enemy city is just ahead
Why did I accept this..? How come we can't decide instead?
The person next to me...an arrow goes through his vest
The friend to my right...falls in pain, fire burns his chest
Thoughts in my mind...I will never see my family again
There is an enemy...holding a spear ahead of me
V/Deleon
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