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Old 06-18-04, 10:04 PM   #8
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deleon: your topical verse was just hott....the wordplay and rhyme scheme was very very good...not really any good multies but your w/p made up for it.... structure was decent...the consistency and flow was very good...overall very hott verse with lots of emotion....

overall: 7.5/10

L.E: your verse was decent and the flow was good and you had better structure...but your verse lacked emotion and consistency...it was a good verse but deleon had the better one...

overall: 5.5/10

vote: deleon

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