LE-You was pretty close but not that good in the vocab
You had some pretty good things in there but yea Similies
was pretty but did really lack off on some stuff

Deleon-You was very imaginary and you had some nice Vocab
and similies and metaphores was aight...Structure was ok
but mainly You had some good things and I liked it

Overall-Deleon took this becuz he was more imaginary
and and his vocab murked it

v/Deleon

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