Yo Deleon took this with better imagery, I like the way you portrayed the end of the world in a bibilical sense. You both took different perspectives, LE kind of told a personal story of an individual wile Deleon took a broader bibilical sense. It seemed to work better for Deleon, plus Deleon had better vocab as well.

v- Deleon

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

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