wow.. flow intelligent.. very nice verse man, i really liked it, You have good emotion, but not enough imagery as said above, but i liked your verse, i could feel what you were feeling well what that person is feeling lol. Your vocab is okay, but I think you can do better, but as for reading your verse for the first time, im pretty impressed. Man all i could do is admitt your better then me . LoL, wonder if we gonna battle.

Tony.. Dude? You verse was okay, i liked that one line Justin Timberlake crying thing, that was a good metaphor or what ever you call it, but I liked it alot.. sadly, thast the only line I liked, your whole topical lacked emotion, imagery, and vocab, so basicly work on those three topics I gave you okay? good job though, pretty good, but i'd say average.

Vote: Flow