Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid
Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases
6...this was an ok punch, i wasn't really feelin the setup with the whole you takin him out with all the low blows and shit, loads of people have dropped shit like that!!
He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough
By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck
7...LMAO!!! comedy lines are cool!!! the whole teeth duck idea was nice and it went with the setup well so props on that!!
Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters
O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER!
8...DOPE!!!! the wordplay in this punch was dope as fuck with the whole Obi Won shit, you played nicely off his vader alias with the star wars concept!!!
See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends
Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting
6...decent personal, a nice punch although i think that the whole bar was kinda basic and cud've been better with some dope wordplay!!!
Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast
So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash*
6...yeah, not all that similar to Marv's punch in fact, but still i wasn't feelin it and it lacked really in comparison to ya earlier punches!!
Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man
With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands!
6...played concept, but ya made it funny with the wedding bands piece!!
"Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted
Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included
7...DAMN!!! playin off his user title like that was dope and nuthin too basic with the rhymin either!!
Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down
So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned"
.................................................. ......................King ME
5...NO!!! worst part of ya verse, the whole elevation and dentist concepts are both played, i have seen them many times before!!

OVERALL: 51/80



We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away
5...not feelin the opener, i mean even with the link.....talkin about hot shit to play off his name has been done too many times, i am yet to see an original play on his name!!
Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes
Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes
5...callin him gay was stupid and pointless, and the whole dickridin concept is fuckin played like shit man!! i mean at least try to make it funny when ya use it!!
He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon
Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron
7...LOL!!! a nice line at last, the oxymoron part was dope, although i feel the setup was kinda basic!!
Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching
Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin)
7...NICE!!! a good play off of his user title and with the dope wordplay it made a nice punch altogether!!
Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass
Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass
6...nice punch, the setup was pretty average but the J-Kidd shit was nice!!
Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave
Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead
...is after he's dug up their grave
8...DAMN!!! LMFAO!!! this was a killer line, original concept and an overall dope punch!!
C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue
Your like last place marathon finishers
...you've come so far just to lose
7...nice wordplay, the marathon concept has been done a few times before but you put a new twist on it so props for that!!
Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin
Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in
7...good wordplay again, a nice closer, the barcode - punch it in concept was pretty nice!!!

OVERALL: 52/80

damn...that was a close battle...
both came good, although not as consistent as i expected...both had a REAL DOPE line and both had some wack lines....i thought that hotshh had it at first cuz JTR had a couple of gay lines to begin with, but he brought it together to the end with some real nice punches....hotshh had some nice punches, just not as hard hittin as jack and he had that gay line at the end.........

no hate...

VOTE = Jack The Ripper

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