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Old 06-23-05, 07:59 PM   #2
Prolific
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Interesting...thats a creative way to present a piece. Your choice of words was brilliant and painted a clear image in my head, especially in the first stanza "Idealism". Its almost not just a poem but something you could find in a novel. Well writtten piece, keep droppin ma
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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold
Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds
You will realize and know it's me
I told you my story through the eyes of poetry
I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life
And I'd be damned for the strife
but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific
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