damn DQ, you did this nicely. very deep.

Brownish hypnotizing eyes as a mystery to my being
Gently caressing your smooth caramel skin with a kiss
Seeking your moist tasty lips as my sole companions
Craving for your strong arms to hide me from the world
Shivers down my spine by your mere breath on my body
Touching me so tender like painting a true masterpiece
So serene and pure yet so powerful and overwhelming

...Idealism...
^^^OMG, great emotion, nothing at all qould i change on this piece, great emotion,
Touching me so tender like painting a true masterpiece<<<<very nice wordplay, good form of structure.

Fragile heart aches for I can only express through words
Appearing on a cold, emotionless screen without passion
Single salty tear escapes my greyish eyes when I realize
That body of water might slow us down but won't stop us
For our bond is too strong to be denied, I know you know
How much I care about you although I cannot tell you yet
Whenever you're frowning, think of me and flash a smile

...Realism...
^^^this was nice, damn this has so much information and is so very touching. you really dragged me into this story line. very intracate.