Brownish hypnotizing eyes as a mystery to my being
Gently caressing your smooth caramel skin with a kiss
Seeking your moist tasty lips as my sole companions
Craving for your strong arms to hide me from the world
Shivers down my spine by your mere breath on my body
Touching me so tender like painting a true masterpiece
So serene and pure yet so powerful and overwhelming

I love this girl ...Alright you had some nice meta'z here that surrounded imagination and emotion.

Touching me so tender like painting a true masterpiece
^^ Love that line...Great wordplay. Your imagination was good too, like i can create a picture...and actually "Live" in it...this was a decent part of your verse.

...Idealism...



Fragile heart aches for I can only express through words
Appearing on a cold, emotionless screen without passion
Single salty tear escapes my greyish eyes when I realize
That body of water might slow us down but won't stop us
For our bond is too strong to be denied, I know you know
How much I care about you although I cannot tell you yet
Whenever you're frowning, think of me and flash a smile

-This part of your verse was the best aspect of "Emotion"..The imagination was good, but i think the best aspect of it was the emotion. Upp on your vocab, and you should putted some wordplays on this part..But this part was overall decent too...

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