Voted For: lilchiofthachi

sorry, but chi takes this hands down.

chi...
you came really simple in this, but your flow was decent and your structure was on point. you had some okay ideas/concepts, but i feel that you didnt capitolize on them properly. some of your verse seemed more like self glorification rather then battling.....be careful with that. work on your punches and personals........vocab wouldnt hurt either.

jp...
sorry bruh, but you came with some played lines. your vocab was bad and your structure was horrible. no offense playboy, but i wasnt really entertained by your piece at all. try working on structure, punches, vocab, multies, flow and personals. drop some pieces in the open mic forum before you jump into battles.....it'll help you to prepare for text battles better. dont let my comments get you down......im only trying to help. hold it down pimp.

oner...

s.v.......c.s.

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