aight so far

im listening...

vocals is nice..lyrics is dope....style is dope...kinda not on beat on one part...dont like how you cuss alot ...expand your vocab......

beat is dope...
second verse is starting wack....you talking about hoes...no thats dumb...
you just talking about how e thug you are..lol
no this verse lyrically is wack....and you aint even spit on beat..lol

3rd versedont like how you started this hsit..but getting better...lyrics is better but your flow is off in some parts...BULLY..lol NO......kinda fell off in the end..


you should have took more time to write your 2nd and 3rd verse..

your flow was off in second verse
also your flow wasnt as great as you make it out to be
your voice has mad potiential yo
quality is not that good...
it kinda sounds like your spittin lyrics behind a beat...it doesnt really sound mixed good.

just jkeep making trcks in time you will get better...

i like how you kept that school shit going...

nice shit...

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