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Old 05-05-08, 05:26 PM   #19
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Voted For: D523

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your opener is good, smooth punch and nice personal. You have a good consistant flow and decent amount of ok punches. I think you could of closed your verse a lot more solid. But its a good personal either way.
Overall, could of been a lot better, but you have some decent punches in there.

D523, first of all. Fuck off with the bold text. We all know what a multi is, you have no reason to bold your rhymes, its looks fucking wack as fuck and pisses me off when Im reading your verse.

Your openers shit, good attempt at a personal but you didnt pull it off too well.

Little Rookie…If You Think You On My Level Not Even, Ill Leave Your Heart Bleedin
Soon As You Stop Breathin, You Start Seein A New World In Hell Without Gods Teachings

This is just one big boring ass filler with bolded rhymes.

Your last two punches are what took this for you.

good battle