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Old 08-05-04, 01:41 AM   #6
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Voted For: schema

Schema

a cat that wanna beef with schema is yet to be seen
start sleepin now cause you gon only beat me in a wet dream
--Haha! Very good opener and punch 8/10
you a wanna be vet but youll prolly never wear the crown b
ill eat you faster than caliph could eat up a whole brownie
--Haha, i liked that, made a punch at caliph too, i liked that..cuz i dont like his faggot ass 7/10
your flow and structure is weak and all ya rhymes is babbles
fuck it i just made that shit up actually this his first battle
--haha coulda been better, but alright 7/10
youre gonna make me waste ten bars cause i know you gon come wack
ill humiliate you in ya first fight like mike tyson's comeback
--Very nice! Nice Meta, and a great punch 8/10
i dont need dickrides...ya whole verse is like a nightmare
i can get a ko off skill in 5 votes dogg I fight fair
--Wasnt really a good punch...kinda filler 6/10
parental advisory explizit's content'll have you nappin like ether
but dont worry cause your kids aint tryin to hear that wack shit either
--Haha, didnt rhyme...but doesnt always have to 7/10
yall this kids really startin to piss me off
hyped himself up as good on aim and then his shit's this soft
--lmao Explizit-Text Champ..MY ASS! Nice punch 7/10
please...he had me thinkin this was a real lyrical contest
then dropped a verse that was faker then a high school bomb threat
--Ha, speakin of those...we got a bomb threat everyday for a week last year...anyways nice punch 7/10

and i dont need a fancy hack to know all about how his shit's wack
ive already seen the whole thing twice when he posted it in bitch slapped
--Ha, mos def a newb..postin his battle in bitch slapped lol good punch 7/10
so to the next terrible cat thats thinkin hes gon face me with rhymes
get a even battle goin with explizit and quit wastin my time
--Nice lol, good punch 8/10

Total=71/100 Good shit man

Explizit-Not breakin your shit down, wack as fuck...and you said you were a text champ on another site...i highly doubt that..if you are..I want the link...Hell, i'd be the illest to ever come there if your the text champ....crap structure...it at least had a flow...but it sucked ass
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