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Old 02-12-05, 08:14 PM   #13
JRoy
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Ok Tha vote
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I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission
hmm last word first line confusin...ok bar....5/10
Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt
Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt
Kinda played stuff..decent......best line in the drop 7/10
Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see
Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy
Its ok....second best i'd give it a 6/10

Iight Man....you did a decent job Meth..but that wasn't really multies...but decent drop overall 6/10

Next...Prem



Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks...
Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked...
Nice really feeling the multies used here......real nice man 8/10
Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue...
Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo...
iight this wasn't ya best bar..but it was iight.....7/10
Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin...
I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin...
Nice...i liked this last line...was hittin..was feelin multies....7.5/10

Ok Prem came way harder in this..and it looks like he tried harder.....and came harder......meth you did iight...but Prem really got it......nice man...

V/PREM
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