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Old 08-12-05, 10:40 AM   #14
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Premmy.
Flow was off due to your choppy'ness. You were sayin ur next line before u finished sayin the last one. U just need to relax a bit. Quality was good. And actually your flow was alot better on the second beat, but your still tryna fit too many words in you lines.

Acuity.
Not as much echo as before is good. but your still doin on the last words of your lines. . Overall a better flow. Though I cringe at the accent, that can't be voted on.

Vote - Acuity
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