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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
good deep storyline...the emotion of it was the highlight.....lyrically it was ok...you coulda been more metaphorical with it...I didn't like your direct approach but it was a emotional piece..it developed well..good structure...flowed well....coulda changed up rhyme scheme some but not big deal...overal solid drop...keep it up
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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