I Liked It Mayn .. Nice Imagery .. Added Some Wordplay .. And Internalz For The Flow .. Nice Drop .. Made All Of It Seem True .. And You Put Feeling Into It .. The Only Thing Is the Structure .. You Should Keep It Like You Did In The Last Lines Of The Middle ..

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