Originally Posted by Ltizzle

godaamn @ this track...
first things first

intro-
loving how the dude apexx got on it
it really gives it more of a protege type/up and coming star feel to it..

beat-
pretty str8
someone wanted me to do a track wit em on this beat but i turned it down...
however, im DEFINETLY liking you on this beat
i think you fit it perfectly

and word to how you get right into it
i loooooove the start of your verse, i unno why i jus do
killin them punches, shit sound like something you be spittin on the street to a group...and thats wassup
ya first verse is almost perfect in my book, i aint findin nuttin i dont like in it...if i had to find one thing itd be quality, and even thats pretty damn decent.
emotion is off the fucking chain, like i said i picture you spittin this to a group...

the 2nd verse is pretty solid as well
not as good as the first, mostly because your flow was a tad bit off in some parts
lyrics is still pretty str8
overall i say the 1st verse outshined the 2nd though, but hey still nice...

but the number one thing im not feeling in this track is the hook..
i know hooks can be a pain in the ass most of the time, but just sit down and think about it for awhile and youll eventually get one..
the whole point of a hook is to make it catchy, nah mean?
i think it wouldve been crazy had you kept the whole concept of it now, but thrown in something right before it sorta like..
"i thought you knew? im tooo hot for yalllll man"
^^just an example
but yea, hook could use some work, but thats really it.

overall, i was most definetly feeling this track
i listened to it a few times, out of pleasure..
most of the times ill jus peep a track once, maybe twice just to write up some feed for it..but this i actually bumped cause i liked it. so thats saying something
8/10

keep em coming fam
and we should hit up a collab sometime