Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~

ya flows a lil' strict, instead of lettin it come out naturally it seemed really structured, but uhm, the lyrics were nice *raspberry* I wasn't bout to read, I actually heard everything you said... Lyrics were pretty good, flow was good for the beat, intro- nice by Apexx, i was feeling both verses... your energy was pretty good on the track, stay up..

this wasn't bad, the only thing I wasn't feelin was the Chorus, It seem like you coulda added much more to it. But yeah, straight track.......
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