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Old 08-23-05, 04:18 AM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Robert De Niro

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i say he takes it man WERD

exposed, cause stanza couldn't come sick if he had a fever
stanza could 'shit out an award' but still wouldn't be an 'achiever'
^^ was a good opener................str8 personal


slow progress cause his process of making it come's like a snail
any slower you can move back, cause his delivery slower then mail
^^......another great personal str8

stan's to much of a self glory person, you don't need medication*
you could board a plain an write your verse still would succeed in elevation
^^.....good finisher.....man WERD nuff said

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