Word.....I like this song a lot man. You got some nice lyrics in this shit. Its not the same shit I'm used to hearing from you which is good. I think the vocals might be the slightest bit too loud, but I'm not usually a good judge of that....lol. Your flow is good. Trip's part in the hook struck me as odd only cause it's the only contrast to your voice in the whole song. It kinda sticks out more than I think it should. Maybe if he lowered it more and panned it to kinda sound like it was sampled in instead of being a part of the hook itself. You had some nice lines in this too man. I liked your finisher of the second verse....."How can I be fly and down to earth in the same verse". That was nice man. Kinda reminded me of one of my lines..."Ironic how I pollute the airwaves but my shit's a breath of fresh air."


But yeah man....this is some nice shit




RTF.....
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